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By Anonymous -
It was dark and it was time for me to go on stage.
As I was dancing I felt the dry ice fading away.
I was nervous because I thought the audience did not like it. But it was still fun going on stage to dance.

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  1. Anonymous13 October 2016 at 14:06

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  2. Anonymous13 October 2016 at 14:09

    Hi Tulasi this is a lovely piece of writing, I like how you've used lots of describing words. Maybe you could put don't instead of do not. And maybe try put more punctuation.
    Samirah Rm12

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