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It was dark and it was time for me to go on stage.
As I was dancing I felt the dry ice fading away.
I was nervous because I thought the audience did not like it. But it was still fun going on stage to dance.
Apple
Apples are very nice, try a bit or a slice, if it is red or green, it will taste yummy and fresh, apples are healthy, my mum says an apple a day will keep you away from the doctors!
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ReplyDeleteHi Tulasi this is a lovely piece of writing, I like how you've used lots of describing words. Maybe you could put don't instead of do not. And maybe try put more punctuation.
ReplyDeleteSamirah Rm12