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It was dark and it was time for me to go on stage.
As I was dancing I felt the dry ice fading away.
I was nervous because I thought the audience did not like it. But it was still fun going on stage to dance.
water world
Water world On Friday the second of December, the road patrol children all over Hamilton got to go to waterworld, I was one of them. It was a teacher’s only day at Hamilton east school, so parents had to drive us there and two teachers. At waterworld I like going down the hydroslide the most. When I was going down the hydroslide I kept on getting water on my face and I kept on turning around. We even got free ice block and free hotdogs. It was a awesome day.
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ReplyDeleteHi Tulasi this is a lovely piece of writing, I like how you've used lots of describing words. Maybe you could put don't instead of do not. And maybe try put more punctuation.
ReplyDeleteSamirah Rm12